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Tuesday 25 June 2013

Sport Day By Malcolm Thompson

Story Review

Sports Day by Malcolm Thompson

This story is about playing soccer and a little boy and his dad, the little boys name is Maryanne. Maryanne dad always embarrassed him in front of everyone but on the last game Maryanne’s dad didn't embarrassed him.
The characters in the story the characters in the story is Maryanne and his dad.
Where does the story take place the story take place at the author game and home.
I like this story because: it was funny and embarrassing.



Monday 24 June 2013

Granny’s Puna Iwa Toia

WALT review stories we read.

Granny’s Puna Iwa Toia

This story is about Granny’s Puna (Spring). One day a little curious girl who didn’t have a name went to the Puna where only Granny was allowed to go and no one else. She used to go there without the knowledge of her Granny to see the eel which lived in the puna.
The characters in the story are the little girl and her Granny.
I liked this story because the Granny had protected the tuna by not
allowing anyone to go to the puna which was a fresh water spring.